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mjx1 Admiral


Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 2258 Location: england
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 4:03 pm Post subject: story plans |
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Ok the admins want a story and ill give it em but too make this story realistic i want too use actual players in it here's what i need from you
Too apply too be a charector in the story please do the following
Private message me choosing one of these roles:
Good charecter - giving yourself a rank number of impotance in story
Evil charecter - giving yourself a rank number of impotance in story
A good charecter which turns out too be a evil spy
Good charectar which will die
I cant promise all volunteers will have the part they want but i will try and draft them all in somewhere
If a leader of alliance wishes too volunteer there whole alliance into a role that would also be great as i will try too orinatate the alliance gameplay in this story for those alliances which wish too do that i will also need a similair application stating which role e.g. evil alliance, good alliance and if good alliance please choose a player which will die and if evil please choose a player which will be the spy
i would perfer it if you were a experienced player but however i can daft out parts for newbies too youll just have too pretend you know about fleets and stuff - its not that hard i do it all the time lol
this may be your way too fame all players which become charectors will be read about by all the players in the universe for all eternity
thank you for your cooperation i hope too make a good story out of this game for the admin and i hope all players which apply will get the cast they ask for - good luck
i will be casting myself as one of the main good charectors btw
greetz
Lowvoice
" the writter" _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz |
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Nicansis Captain


Joined: 24 Mar 2006 Posts: 97 Location: Phoenix, AZ
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 5:23 pm Post subject: |
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I sure would like to submit (a noob) I will have to think on this to submit to you my idea. _________________ Phoenix? But its a dry heat!! |
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Skyfreak Admiral


Joined: 30 Aug 2003 Posts: 816
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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haha sounds like fun, I mean I would like to see the story with me in it or not  _________________
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mjx1 Admiral


Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 2258 Location: england
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 10:15 pm Post subject: |
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great what type of charecter would you like too be skyfreak evil or good _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz |
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Skyfreak Admiral


Joined: 30 Aug 2003 Posts: 816
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 11:38 pm Post subject: |
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well I think I should go by the way I live now and that is definatly good , But I also helped a lot of noob especially Evans when he was still young  _________________
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Renee Davis 1st Rear Admiral

Joined: 22 Jul 2005 Posts: 298 Location: Lautem, Timor Leste - Lautem District
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 1:17 am Post subject: OK... |
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Me...
A good charecter which turns out too be a evil spy
David...
Good charectar which will die
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spacetrace Board Admin


Joined: 24 Dec 2001 Posts: 1624
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:02 am Post subject: |
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pm me your ideas  |
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Anon De Mouse Admiral


Joined: 21 Jul 2005 Posts: 943 Location: Australia
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:10 am Post subject: |
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Great Idea Lowvoice im going to Apply for a part  _________________ Follow the blood and you will find me!
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just as long as you dont *** out like you did against TO |
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Star Commander Admiral

Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Posts: 1734 Location: Bolton
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:17 am Post subject: |
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Base did help me out alot.
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mast3r w1nn3r 2nd Lieutenant


Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Posts: 30
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:45 am Post subject: |
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lol nice idea but their is already a story about spacetrace in manual _________________ we will win the battle
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steven1982 Admiral


Joined: 24 Oct 2003 Posts: 970 Location: Zwolle, the Netherlands
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 12:06 pm Post subject: |
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Can i be an evil character who wishes to take over the galaxy in an evil way???
hehehehe muhahahaha (offcourse thats laughing in an evil way)
Greets _________________
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mjx1 Admiral


Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 2258 Location: england
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 7:31 pm Post subject: |
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ok then these are the volunteers i have so far
Lowvoice - good
Nicansis - newbie - good
T2 - evil
Base - good
Rubens - evil
Evans - good goes evil
Connor - good
Renee - good goes evil
Gorthmog - evil
Nightwolf - good
Osiris - good
kame - evil
DaveAlan - good charector that dies
Anon de mouse - evil fleet commander
Marlito - evil
Archilles - a neutral freelancer who shoots for points
Compu_head - good
Mighty - good goes evil
Runemaster - good goes evil
Knight of Truth - evil
Tweety - evil goes good
Runemaster - good goes evil
and a there's mystery charectar - try and guess who
i would like too thank all those who have volunteered so far now is there any more volunteers before i start writting
spacetrace i have sent you my rough plan of whats going too happen in the story is that okay?
if anybody has any quiries about there position in the story please pm me asap
i am also thinking about intergrating a the forum and irc into the story but they will have different names offcause because im trying too make this realistic none of that Matrix crap "he logged on into the Matrix" fuck that
i wish too start writting soon so speak now or forever hold your peace basically
and i may not be as active because aswell as writting this i also have homework and i have a actual life outside this game a very boring one but still
so i will write it as fast as i can and i will pm the edditor aka the admin after ive written it and when i have gotten his approval i will pm the story too all the people who have taken envolved and when we have there approval the story will be released too the public
and please note the list is written in order from who volunteered first and not of appearance in book or importance in story
greetz
lowvoice
"the writter" _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz
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spacetrace Board Admin


Joined: 24 Dec 2001 Posts: 1624
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 8:54 pm Post subject: |
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the story will be placed on several planets, the locations of the story should be that planets.
it must be thrilling enough that the readers will jump from planet to planet to read that story, so every sub-story needs to be a cliffhanger.
pls do not forget: making a good story can be hard work !
i will help you with the layout and stuff
it is possible to make many projects |
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mjx1 Admiral


Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 2258 Location: england
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 9:00 pm Post subject: |
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spacetrace wrote: | the story will be placed on several planets, the locations of the story should be that planets.
it must be thrilling enough that the readers will jump from planet to planet to read that story, so every sub-story needs to be a cliffhanger.
i will help you with the layout and stuff
it is possible to make many projects |
ah i get it so i need too add cliffhangers and stuff in dont I and ill break it up into sections aswell its kinda like a mini game kinda like that mission thing we was talking about a while back ok no problem
you want many projects? ok no problem ill get on it _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz |
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mjx1 Admiral


Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 2258 Location: england
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Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 9:13 pm Post subject: |
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i've started writting the sequel with the introduction of a new charectors such as Mohx ,Vrictus and Turiana but im going away for a week on monday so i wont be able too complete this sequel till about a fortnights time meanwhile please enjoy the first story that i kinda rushed because i wanted too get it done before my break but i think its good and it portrays the parts people have asked for
if anymore people wish too be introduced into this new story please pm and i will add you
greetz
Lowvoice
"the writter" _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz |
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mjx1 Admiral


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Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:13 pm Post subject: |
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Spacetrace the story is now avaliable to read online thanks to my friendly
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i removed the links to keep the surprize
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admin
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enjoy
the next story will be about the great war of TO, PFIU and TRA
we couldnt have a story without Shade putting in a appearance could we? _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz |
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Osiris Captain

Joined: 07 Mar 2006 Posts: 135
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Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:24 pm Post subject: |
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nice story i'm not a big speaker am I  _________________ By suffering comes wisdom
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admin Board Admin


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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:38 am Post subject: |
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hey lowvoice,
brilliant work, we will integrate it into the game, at the beginning of next week.
i removed the direct links here from the forum, so it willl be more of a surprise to all players. you should send a pm to the players, that have to read it before we can publish it |
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mjx1 Admiral


Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 2258 Location: england
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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 10:54 am Post subject: |
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ah a suprise ok well i guess it was only a few people which read it anyway but for all those who have read it and sent me the comments via pm i thank you kindly for your words i wasnt sure about the story myself but as long as you like it i guess thats all that matters as Stephen King once said sometimes the writter is the worste critic
i will pm the players the story that were involved in the story if they pm me asking me if they want to read it, otherwise by the admins choice it will be a suprise to the general public to read it you must start the adventure yourself
sorry o-siris i guess you had few lines ill try and include you more next time
as stated the next story will be about TO vs PFIU and TRA i have allready had possitive cooperation from many members of those alliances and i will soon put together something hopefully bigger and better than ever before
and i work for free as a favour of the admin arent i generous  _________________ "Although the constant shadow of certain death looms over everyday, the pleasures and joys of life can be so fine and deeply affecting that the heart is nearly stilled by astonishment" - Dean R Koontz |
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iuztheevil Commander


Joined: 02 Jun 2006 Posts: 86
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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 1:01 pm Post subject: Neutral.... |
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Can you throw me in there as thoroughly evil who shifts to more or less neutral? Kind of a soldier of fortune empire  |
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