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[Black Dragon]

I am the the leader of the Dragon Fire alliance. I am currently reqruiting anyone from noobs to profesionals. I have much experienc in the field of fleet setup and I am a good tactitian. Consider joining the newly emerging force that will dominate all
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The dragons have given their power to the most worthy

[Connor McCloud]

And you have played under what name before ? ? If you want to dominate all PLZ step at the back of the Line
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Greetz Connor

[MicroJak]

Well, I give it:

78%

Kind of good, although there is a spelling mistake in recruiting professionals, and experience. However, very good use of boldness and italics. Shame you didn't put colour or a full stop at the end.

Great persuasive text though, I havn't seen anything that good for a long time. I'd suggest you'd put another paragraph after to say more about your alliance, otherwise noobs will wnat to join, they just want those final things to learn more about your alliance, were, how, and when to join. Pro's know that already.


I do believe Connor is right, there are loads of alliances, who want to dominate them all, I have been in 4/4 alliances with that ambition. Basically every alliance say they will dominate all, but only 1 will prevail.


Although, seeing as it is near the end of the Grand War, I think you've timed the topic to perfection. I, and some other players who took part in the war will be looking for a new alliance to join. So I think your garunteed noobs, and at least 1 member who took part in the Grand War.


Hope you will read all of this, If you want a draft of a new recruitment topic, pm me.


Also to noobs, if you want to join this alliance, pm Black Dragon.
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